KazKat

WTF!!!!
I never really write critiques of books (I just give a star rating) as I think usually everyone has "something to say" but this book I really had to express my own opinion.
First third shopping list, the author wants us to know she knows all about luxury goods and their cost, or it's her wish list for Christmas and maybe hubby will buy or she has been paid an exorbitant amount to advertise.
Second third social anthropological dissertation on the evolution of the species Wow how could a woman write this drivel, I told my daughter about the listing and comparison of male /female works of art,my daughter replied "2000 years of female repression"
Third part a travel brochure that lists the most expensive travel destinations all over the world, Again author's wish list or paid advertising who knows!!!!!!!!!!!!but after the third mention of the swanky hotel or the naming of the umpteenth lingerie brand or watch IT GETS REALLY BORING!
REAL story is told in 20 pages, emotional involvement zero, character development less than zero, the original premise of the story was quite good but how it was brought about was ABSOLUTE RUBBISH. This author if you could call her that SHOULD go and take a master class with Kristin Ashley on how to write involving emotional stories even E L James did better than this Fifty shades seems a masterpiece in comparison. My one big question is WHO was the publisher and was the EDITOR high whilst reading this book, because even I could have made a better job of editing this one (don't take in the first place ). Last words GOD help us for Books 2 and 3.

I don't usually write reviews as I like reading too much but this time I just had to. I have to agree with one of the posts that this was a really Unsatisfactory read As the story ends thirty pages in and then we had a five page conclusion at the end. In the middle 300 pages of pure crap, repetitive scenes, the girl is a full blown alcoholic. The boy a wimp with no balls. A myriad of spelling mistakes and misused words (what were the proof readers and beta readers doing?) My usual rule of reading is if in the first 20 or 30 pages I'm bored stop reading, with this one I persevered as the story was promising but MY BAD stupid characters,doing stupid things, with no logic. I really wish I could get back the time I wasted on this book, I just should have re-read a Kristen Ashley book That way I wouldn't have been left with a bad taste in my mouth. Oh well you live and learn onward and upward.

Liked this book a lot, it had a good premise and was well developed, though more attention could be paided to the proof reading and editing.

I have never written a review before but for this one I will. Incredible
LOL book and should be made into a film this I would like to see.